tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9089616.post448095851545266525..comments2023-12-30T18:56:13.073-05:00Comments on Land Mammal: DraftishAnne Haineshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17038705452206752521noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9089616.post-18249354746604254222008-04-24T23:52:00.000-04:002008-04-24T23:52:00.000-04:00Thanks, you guys. I appreciate it.Thanks, you guys. I appreciate it.Anne Haineshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17038705452206752521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9089616.post-73235646354789413992008-04-24T20:43:00.000-04:002008-04-24T20:43:00.000-04:00i agree, great first draft.i agree, great first draft.Montgomery Maxtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12802362199202674977noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9089616.post-31751729832323415282008-04-24T00:51:00.000-04:002008-04-24T00:51:00.000-04:00I finally catch one of your drafts still up! I lov...I finally catch one of your drafts still up! I love the stripped simplicity of the observation "I've never seen ashes before. / They look like ashes." Paints finality with the futility of seeking a profound observation at such a moment. Nicely done.David Vincentihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10572861860566117361noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9089616.post-46105575735505849952008-04-23T20:22:00.000-04:002008-04-23T20:22:00.000-04:00Great first draft. I love the line "this is what w...Great first draft. I love the line "this is what we become, this whisper..." <BR/><BR/>Fantastic!Collin Kelleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03777180960376039699noreply@blogger.com