tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9089616.post6524488324002566841..comments2023-12-30T18:56:13.073-05:00Comments on Land Mammal: Retreat, First MorningAnne Haineshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17038705452206752521noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9089616.post-62302172565538432752008-06-03T17:40:00.000-04:002008-06-03T17:40:00.000-04:00Wow, gorgeous! I love the sound of the "urgency o...Wow, gorgeous! I love the sound of the "urgency of birds."Kate Evanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16478737570632377733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9089616.post-7465851918654969732008-06-03T14:26:00.000-04:002008-06-03T14:26:00.000-04:00love the vulture sequence and fragments. also this...love the vulture sequence and fragments. also this line: "divvied up in minutes."Emily A. Bentonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07386942328025128159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9089616.post-19684393922224756362008-06-03T08:50:00.000-04:002008-06-03T08:50:00.000-04:00I read that article too :) I have some other info...I read that article too :) I have some other info I obtained from a seminar during MFA if you want to drop me an email.<BR/><BR/>I'm fully in the throes of trying to put together my thesis/manuscript. Best thing about it so far? Once you get a rough order it is kind of fun to revise and see how pieces fit together you didn't think may have fit together before.Jessie Cartyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13181286764480973423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9089616.post-70969054897376636552008-06-02T17:43:00.000-04:002008-06-02T17:43:00.000-04:00Love the immediacy of the poem. You're already cre...Love the immediacy of the poem. You're already creating. Enjoy your retreat!Collin Kelleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03777180960376039699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9089616.post-32643197018784452172008-06-02T16:23:00.000-04:002008-06-02T16:23:00.000-04:00Good luck with your manuscript! That's one of my g...Good luck with your manuscript! That's one of my goals this summer, too, is to get that manuscript together, but I don't know if that is going to happen. My poetry is all over the place.Karen J. Weyanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04870809238605691875noreply@blogger.com