tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9089616.post8155184291646145473..comments2023-12-30T18:56:13.073-05:00Comments on Land Mammal: Sunday draftAnne Haineshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17038705452206752521noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9089616.post-28875387905440568642009-08-04T19:45:06.369-04:002009-08-04T19:45:06.369-04:00Thanks, all! Leslie - nope, I'm pretty sure th...Thanks, all! Leslie - nope, I'm pretty sure this isn't for the music ms. - I think it's for (gulp) whatever comes after it.Anne Haineshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17038705452206752521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9089616.post-40208728294709224802009-08-03T19:07:21.494-04:002009-08-03T19:07:21.494-04:00Good first draft. I see lots of places I would tig...Good first draft. I see lots of places I would tighten up, but you've got some great imagery here.Collin Kelleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03777180960376039699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9089616.post-59122259728040264482009-08-03T17:49:01.761-04:002009-08-03T17:49:01.761-04:00i love the format of the long lines for this one :...i love the format of the long lines for this one :)Jessie Cartyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13181286764480973423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9089616.post-38339003594622219642009-08-02T21:44:47.391-04:002009-08-02T21:44:47.391-04:00My favorite?:
You want to latch on and not move f...My favorite?:<br /><br />You want to latch on and not move forward.<br /><br />I've felt like that. Excellent draft. Is this one for the music ms?Lesliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11163920808413285914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9089616.post-80144598260382692832009-08-02T20:11:46.795-04:002009-08-02T20:11:46.795-04:00So much I like here, especially "Years we wan...So much I like here, especially "Years we wander through like stanzas or the lines on a stranger’s palm." Glad I caught this before it disapparated!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com