Monday, June 25, 2007

drafty in here

I haven't been writing much for the past month or so -- so I am glad for what comes, even if it's not much (as this one isn't).

It won't stay up for long...


[snippity-snip]

4 comments:

Matthew said...

Beautiful poem, Anne. So simple and yet. Just a suggestion but I'd get rid of the line that goes: "year after year so sweet" because you already have "sweet" less than three lines before it, plus then again at the end. But that's all, I think. I'm just a random and occasional reader of your blog, by the way.

Anne said...

Thanks, Matthew!

Jilly said...

lovely

Anne said...

Thanks, Jilly! You got in just under the wire. ;)