I haven't been writing much for the past month or so -- so I am glad for what comes, even if it's not much (as this one isn't).
It won't stay up for long...
[snippity-snip]
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Beautiful poem, Anne. So simple and yet. Just a suggestion but I'd get rid of the line that goes: "year after year so sweet" because you already have "sweet" less than three lines before it, plus then again at the end. But that's all, I think. I'm just a random and occasional reader of your blog, by the way.
4 comments:
Beautiful poem, Anne. So simple and yet. Just a suggestion but I'd get rid of the line that goes: "year after year so sweet" because you already have "sweet" less than three lines before it, plus then again at the end. But that's all, I think. I'm just a random and occasional reader of your blog, by the way.
Thanks, Matthew!
lovely
Thanks, Jilly! You got in just under the wire. ;)
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