ain't no sin to be glad you're alive
Anne, I like this a lot, especially the ending. It's mournful but not depressing, and the window imagery works well.
I meant that the poem is mournful, not the ending. The ending lightens up the darkness.
Garbo: Thanks! I was gonna say, I *hope* the ending isn't mournful. It's not meant to be a bummer of a poem, just maybe a bit wistful. :)Woody: Awww, thanks... I miss your blog, darnit!
Beautiful write. Subtle play of light and shadows.
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Anne, I like this a lot, especially the ending. It's mournful but not depressing, and the window imagery works well.
I meant that the poem is mournful, not the ending. The ending lightens up the darkness.
Garbo: Thanks! I was gonna say, I *hope* the ending isn't mournful. It's not meant to be a bummer of a poem, just maybe a bit wistful. :)
Woody: Awww, thanks... I miss your blog, darnit!
Beautiful write. Subtle play of light and shadows.
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